Tuesday, 26 January 2010
REVIEW PAGE: Choosing most appropraite images from film
REVIEW PAGE: Drafting text

This was the layout for our Magazine review which we got we came about this idae by examining how other review pages looked and then we incorporated these style into our own ideas.
Because of the plan we came up with we only had one draft to do with very little changes to make which were just spelling corrections.
This was our final product of our film review page.
REVIEW PAGE: Resaerching different film magazine audiences
FILM POSTER: Drafting/ editing

After sketching the layout of our poster we then made a model of it on the computer to get a better and clearer view of how our poster would look like.
This was the 1st stage of our poster with the older brother in the background section of the poster.
2nd stage
We then took a Picture with Emmanuel which will be used as the fore ground.
We used the software firefox to cut this picture this was a long process as we wanted to give the illusion that this picture was taken in one go.
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I then pasted it onto the original picture in the 1st stage, giving the illusion that the younger brother is spying or keeping a close eye on his older brother.
Finally we added the font and credits, we also put in an effect in the background of a white substance it affects the older brother but not the younger one, giving the feel that the older brother is entagled in the trap of iNSOMNiA.
FILM POSTER: Choosing most appropriate images
We wanted to choose the right image for our poster so we had to take a variety of pictures so that our poster could give out the right image.

First of all we emptied out the room to see what effect that it would give to the poster, we did not choose this particular one because the room looked empty and unused which would not make our poster look realistic.

We then rearranged the room in a messy way making it looked used, and giving the effect to the audeience that the owner of the room is disorganised and confused.
We then went onto the foreground picture for the younger brother and we needed his face to be in the right position for the poster to look realistic we first of all took this one but the character looked sad and not cunning.;

We finally took this picture and this was the take that we were looking for that would give the audience the right effect since he looks like he is spying on someone. As ytou can see we already started erasing the background to get the picture ready for pasting on the original.
First of all we emptied out the room to see what effect that it would give to the poster, we did not choose this particular one because the room looked empty and unused which would not make our poster look realistic.
We then rearranged the room in a messy way making it looked used, and giving the effect to the audeience that the owner of the room is disorganised and confused.
We then went onto the foreground picture for the younger brother and we needed his face to be in the right position for the poster to look realistic we first of all took this one but the character looked sad and not cunning.;
We finally took this picture and this was the take that we were looking for that would give the audience the right effect since he looks like he is spying on someone. As ytou can see we already started erasing the background to get the picture ready for pasting on the original.
FILM POSTER: Exploring fonts
We developed our font to a professional standard by making improvements to each of the fonts we made by adding new designs to suit the nature of our film.

This was the first design of font that we made, we initially went with this because of the bold features such as the capital letters and the sharp edges.

We played around with the title and decided to change the colour of the font to white and gave it a black background. This was just an experiment.

We then enhanced our previous title because of the dull look it had so we changed the design to give a more horror movie look with faded white background lighting. This style of font was too flashy, as when an on goer sees the poster they would concentrate on the title too much.

Afterwards we changed the style of font and kept the black background, because it gives the font an effect of mystery and is also eye catching.

This was the first design of font that we made, we initially went with this because of the bold features such as the capital letters and the sharp edges.

We played around with the title and decided to change the colour of the font to white and gave it a black background. This was just an experiment.

We then enhanced our previous title because of the dull look it had so we changed the design to give a more horror movie look with faded white background lighting. This style of font was too flashy, as when an on goer sees the poster they would concentrate on the title too much.
Afterwards we changed the style of font and kept the black background, because it gives the font an effect of mystery and is also eye catching.
FILM POSTER: Setting up mise en scene
The first place that came to mind when thinking of a place to make our poster was the room of the older brother, but the picture we had taken shows the older brother in the background and the younger brother in the foreground.


This is the background with the older brother that we took initially
We then added some special effects to the pictures to give it the 'Insomnia' feel.
FILM POSTER: Sketching possible images
First of all when we were planning for our poster we decided to do sketches to bring us to our final outcome.
This was our first sketch which was just a small plan.
we used this to know how the poster was going to be designed and where to place all the counterparts like the title and images.

After we got the ideas down we started to sketch them quickly to get the full picture of how the poster would look like.
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This was the outcome that we came to, this final sketch enabled us to come up with good ideas for our film poster. with different ways to position our characters and our font in whatever way we felt.
This was our first sketch which was just a small plan.
we used this to know how the poster was going to be designed and where to place all the counterparts like the title and images.
After we got the ideas down we started to sketch them quickly to get the full picture of how the poster would look like.
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This was the outcome that we came to, this final sketch enabled us to come up with good ideas for our film poster. with different ways to position our characters and our font in whatever way we felt.
FILM POSTER: Pitching ideas for poster
Pitching ideas for our poster was an easy task for our group as we had loads of ideas which we could put together.
When I drew out my first idea this is how it came out, after the plan of how we wanted the poster to be laid out:

In this initial plan, the older brother is in the foreground and the younger brother is in the background as an effect of making him look like a sly person, making the older character look more important. We used the bed as a representation of sleep and the alarm clock under the bed as a representation of time waiting for nobody, as during the film as time passes by the older brother can't sleep.
When I drew out my first idea this is how it came out, after the plan of how we wanted the poster to be laid out:

In this initial plan, the older brother is in the foreground and the younger brother is in the background as an effect of making him look like a sly person, making the older character look more important. We used the bed as a representation of sleep and the alarm clock under the bed as a representation of time waiting for nobody, as during the film as time passes by the older brother can't sleep.
FILM POSTER: Analysing conventions of film posters
When looking at film poster we mainly looked at films which had the same Genre as our or looked like the had the same Genre for example our Group came across the film Guess who
We took the Idea of Bernie mac (left) hiding behind the door for our film except our character (emmanuel) is peaking into the room by the wall spying on his older brother.
FILM: Shooting schedule
To shoot our film we scheduled some days to come together to make it.
This is our shooting Schedule:
Friday 27th November: The filming of scene 1 at 9 a.m. due to the morning establishing shot of the house.
Saturday 28th November: The filming of scene 2 at 6:30pm due to Night time establishing shot of the house.
Wednesday 18th November: Filming of confrontation between the older and younger brother.
Monday 30th November: Filming of scenario’s first scenario is the turning on of the central heating which disturbs the older brother from sleeping
Thursday 10th December: Pictures for our film poster taken of older brother sitting on the edge of bed looking stressed and the younger brother watching him from outside the bedroom.
Sunday 13th December: Completion of scene 2 after younger brother has found the timetable. Beginning of scene 3 from when Older brother has gone to sleep.
Wednesday 16th Decmber: Filming of the last scenarios. The tidying up of the shoes, house cleaning and younger brother on the phone.
Thursday 14th December: Filming of the last scene; older brother missing exam and younger brother talking to the teacher.
Saturday 16th december: Going through the last film shootings, anything that can be re filmed and improved on.
This is our shooting Schedule:
Friday 27th November: The filming of scene 1 at 9 a.m. due to the morning establishing shot of the house.
Saturday 28th November: The filming of scene 2 at 6:30pm due to Night time establishing shot of the house.
Wednesday 18th November: Filming of confrontation between the older and younger brother.
Monday 30th November: Filming of scenario’s first scenario is the turning on of the central heating which disturbs the older brother from sleeping
Thursday 10th December: Pictures for our film poster taken of older brother sitting on the edge of bed looking stressed and the younger brother watching him from outside the bedroom.
Sunday 13th December: Completion of scene 2 after younger brother has found the timetable. Beginning of scene 3 from when Older brother has gone to sleep.
Wednesday 16th Decmber: Filming of the last scenarios. The tidying up of the shoes, house cleaning and younger brother on the phone.
Thursday 14th December: Filming of the last scene; older brother missing exam and younger brother talking to the teacher.
Saturday 16th december: Going through the last film shootings, anything that can be re filmed and improved on.
FILM: organising locations, actors, etc
ACTORS
Name: Anthony Gabriel-Lawson (left)

LOCATION
For our film we chose these locations for where it should be set:
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This is the establishing shot of the house at the Beginning of the film.

This is the living room, where the two characters (brothers) meet up while they are having a conversation a trivial matter turns into an argument.

This is the Dining room where the older brother highlights his exam timetable .
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The Establishing shot at night.

This is the older brothers bedroom where he cleans up[ and also has trouble sleeping in some scenes.

The kitchen where the younger plans what he wants to do to make sure his older misses his exam.
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This is the younger brothers room.
Name: Anthony Gabriel-Lawson (left)
Acting name: Emmanuel
Role: Older Brother

This is me I acted as the older brother in our film I was originally meant to be the only character but as a group we had a re-think about this idea and we decided to add Emmanuel as the younger brother.
- Name: Kennedy Nsubuga (right)
- Role: Director/ Editor
This is kennedy the Director of our film who mainly recorded and edited most of our film and did the camera work. He helped alot with the editing process.
Name: Emmanuel Ogunfojuri - Acting Name: E-man
- Role: Younger Brother
This is Emmanuel the younger brother in the film, he was the younger brother because initially we wanted to use only one character,then we decided to add a second character to make the film more interesting. We also used his house to do the filming which made it easy for us to meet up and film.
LOCATION
For our film we chose these locations for where it should be set:
This is the establishing shot of the house at the Beginning of the film.
This is the living room, where the two characters (brothers) meet up while they are having a conversation a trivial matter turns into an argument.
This is the Dining room where the older brother highlights his exam timetable .
The Establishing shot at night.

This is the older brothers bedroom where he cleans up[ and also has trouble sleeping in some scenes.
The kitchen where the younger plans what he wants to do to make sure his older misses his exam.
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This is the younger brothers room.
FILM: Storyboarding
In order to make our film easy to make we made a storyboard in order to make it easy to follow step by step.

This is the first part of the story board which has been changed at the beginning to make our film better.

This is another part of the storyboard which we have used very well in our film as one of the scenarios
This is the first part of the story board which has been changed at the beginning to make our film better.
This is another part of the storyboard which we have used very well in our film as one of the scenarios
FILM: Scripting
Insomnia
Interior – House -day
Music begins to play, film starts with transition of one second fade from black to an establishing shot of a street. Camera CUTs to low angle shot of the sky camera begins to slowly tilt downwards onto the house. In between the tilt, camera cuts to a long shot of a busy road, cars and buses drive by. Camera continues tilt downwards unto the house. Camera CUTS to medium shot of younger brother combing his afro.
Younger Brother: This guy man, he is over there!
Camera CUTS back of the younger brother head watching TV.
Camera CUT to an extreme long shot of older brother walking towards the house
the older brother is wearing a dark green adiddas jacket with his hood up. Camera CUTS to a close up of the back of the younger brother’s head watching TV. Camera CUTS to a long shot of the older brother walking on the driveway towards door getting his keys out of his pocket. Music volume increases. When the older brother reaches the door the Camera cut to an extreme close up older brother using his keys to open door camera begins to zoom out as the older brother begins to take his first steps into the house.
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Scene 1living room and dining room
Camera CUTs to medium shot of older brother shutting the door behind him and taking his hood down. As the Older brother walks away from the front door, the Camera Cuts to an extreme long shot of the back of the older brother walking through the corridor and into the dining room. Music fades out.
Older brother: Yo e-man you in?
Younger Brother: yeah I am in here
As the older brother reaches the end of the dining room, the Camera CUTS to low angle shot of the older brother standing and leaning on the wall with the younger brother sitting on the couch. Camera cut to an over shoulder shot of the older brother talking to the younger brother.
Older Brother: Has mum and dad gone yet?
As younger brother moves his head The camera cuts to low angle shot of the younger brother
Younger brother: ere blad! (stern)
Camera cut to over the shoulder shot of older brother
Younger brother: they left in the morning! (stern, raises voice, facial expression cross)
Camera cut to low angle shot of the back of younger brother sitting on the couch the older brother begins to move towards the younger brother with his hand in his pockets
Older brother: oi bruv don’t give me that attitude (facial expression annoyed irritated)
Camera cut back to over the shoulder shot of older brother moving toward younger brother
Younger brother: Shuttup man! (raises voice, annoyed)
Camera cut to low angle shot of the back younger brother.
Older brother: who do you think you’re talking to? (angry)
Older brother raises his hand towards the younger brother. Younger brother flinches and leans back.
Younger brother: what’s your problem? (furious)
Older brother walks off
Camera cuts back to over the shoulder shot of older brother walking off, the younger brother facial expression is furious.
Camera cuts to Medium shot of older brother leaving the room walking into the dining room as older brother pulls the chair to sit down the camera tilts downward. High angle shot of older brother taking his books out of his bag. As the older brother is taking his books out his bag camera cuts to medium shot of younger brother taking his phone out of his pocket and starts to text. Camera cut to high angle shot of older brother taking out his folder. The camera cut to an extreme close up of the younger brother phone, a text is sent. Then the camera cuts to a POV shot of the older brother highlighting his exam timetable .camera cut back to a long shot of older brother taking off his jacket leaving it on the chair walking off into the corridor. Camera cuts to a long shot of the older brother walking through the corridor towards the camera he puts his hands on the banister as he is going upstairs. Camera cut to long profile shot of older brother walking upstairs.
Interior- house -night
Scene 2
Another High angle of the sky camera begins to tilt downwards as camera tilts downwards the shot slowly dissolves from day into the night . Camera CUT to long shot of younger brother standing up from couch stretching his arms out and yawning. Camera cuts to close up of younger brother scratching his head and walking towards dining room. Camera cuts to long shot of younger brother and tracks him walking towards the dining room. As younger brother walks pass the dining table he notices the older brother exam timetable as younger brother reaches out and grabs the older brother’s exam timetable the camera tilts downwards then the camera tilts upwards as the younger brother bring the exam timetable to his face to read. Meanwhile upstairs the older brother is tidying it up. Camera cuts to an extreme close up of a pillow being pulled across. Camera cut and tilts upwards as the older brother is fluffing up his pillow. Camera tilts downwards as older brother puts the pillow on the mattress. Downstairs the older brother is feeling smug that he found the older brother’s timetable. Camera cut to a medium shot of younger brother looking at the older brother’s timetable
Younger brother: alright then (cocky)
the camera CUTS to a medium shot of the older brother upstairs in his room pulling his curtains together. Downstairs in the living room the younger brother receives a phone call. Camera cuts to a High angle shot of younger brother sitting on the couch his mobile rings. Upstairs the camera cuts to a close up of the older brother wrapping up his mp4 and putting it on his desk. . Camera CUTS back to long shot of younger brother downstairs, the younger brother stands up from the couch speaking on the phone.
Camera tilts upwards.
Younger brother: yeah, hello
Upstairs, Camera cuts back to an extreme close up of older brothers hand arranging his shoes. Downstairs, camera cuts back to close up of younger brother downstairs in the kitchen speaking on his phone.
Younger brother: He is always bullying me! the way he was talking to me this morning! (Irritated, raises voice)
Camera cuts back to frame shot of older brother arranging his shoes. Over the duration of the shot there is voiceover of the younger brother speaking on hisphone.
Younger brother: look he’s got an exam tomorrow and that guy isn’t definitely not gonna make it, yeah that will teach him a lesson (stern)
Camera cuts back to close of younger brother downstairs in the kitchen
Younger brother: yeah just trust me gotta go man bye.
Upstairs the older brother has finished tidying up his room, Camera cuts to medium shot of older brother leaving his room. Camera cut to Long shot of the back of the younger brother downstairs walking out of the kitchen. Camera Cuts to high angle shot of younger brother and older brother at the bottom of the stairs.
Younger brother: Good luck man (smug)
Camera cuts to low angle medium shot of older brother and younger brother. Younger brother is going up the stairs.
Older brother: What you talking about? (Surprised)
Camera cuts to High angle shot of older and younger brother. Younger brother is walking up the stairs.
Younger brother: (chuckles) don’t worry man
Camera cuts to long shot of younger brother and older brother at the stairs.
Younger brother: (chuckles) don’t worry
Older brother: (sighs)
Older brother walks into the kitchen. Camera cut to long shot of the back of the older brother walking to utility room to get something to eat. Camera cut to medium shot of younger brother going upstairs. While downstairs the camera cuts to medium shot of older brother taken bread and butter to the kitchen counter. Camera cuts to medium shot of younger brother upstairs opening the door to his bedroom. Camera cuts back to a medium shot of the older brother just finishing eating his sandwich. Camera cut back to high angle shot of younger brother getting into bed.
Scene 3 House night
Downstairs the camera cut’s to a long shot of older brother leaving the kitchen and going up the stairs to his bedroom as the older brother reaches upstairs he puts his hand on the banister camera cuts to medium shot of older brother walking to his room. camera cuts to medium shot of the back of the older brother he open his door and switches on the light and shuts the door behind him
As the night goes on camera cuts to an extreme close up of an alarm clock camera cuts to medium shot of younger brother peeking out of his room as the younger brother looks left to right the camera pans to a POV shot and pans from the stairs to the bedroom door of the older brother camera cuts to medium shot of younger brother sneaking out of his room he switches the light off in his bedroom and while keeping an eye out for any sign of his older brother coming out of his room and he closes his bedroom door carefully, Camera tracks younger brother as he goes down the stairs. As the younger brother reaches the end of the stairs camera cut to long shot of younger brother and track him walking into the kitchen towards the boiler. the younger brother pulls down the catch on the boiler. the camera cut to an extreme close up of younger brother turning up the knob on the boiler then the Camera cut an extreme close up of the screen on the boiler showing the temperature. When the younger brother has finished turning up the central heating. The Camera cuts to a long shot of pulling the lid of boiler back to its place. Camera tracks younger brother as he walks out of the kitchen towards the stairs. As the younger brother reaches the end of the stairs camera cut to medium shot of younger brother walking towards his bedroom, opening his bedroom door and shutting it behind him. Camera cuts to close of older brother’s face in bed. Due to the rise in temperature the older brother is tossing and turning in his bed throughout this, the shot goes through a series of dissolves. The Last shot dissolves into high angle shot of the older brother sitting on the edge of the bed flicking up his t-shirt up and down.
Scene 4 House Night
Camera cuts to medium shot of younger brother coming out of his room. Camera dissolves to medium shots of the younger brother downstairs messing up the living room by taking out board games books and controller pad and spreading them all over the living room. Camera cut to an extreme close up of older brother feet going downstairs. When the younger brother hear the older brother footsteps camera cuts to medium shot, he rises up the camera tilts upwards.
Younger brother: What’s that? (Surprised)
Camera cut to long shot of younger brother running away (tracked by the camera) from the living room he leans on the dining room wall. He keeps an eye out of the older brother in the background walking across the corridor into the living room. When the younger brother sees that the older brother is out of sight he makes a dash to the stairs. Camera cuts to medium shot and tracks younger brother running to his bedroom, younger brother looks backs at the stairs,
Younger brother: (sighs)
Younger brother goes back into his room. Camera cuts back to long shot of older brother tidying up the living room. As the older brother downstairs tidies up the living room the transitions of shot dissolves as the older brother puts back boar, games, controller pads and books back. Camera dissolves into long shot of older brother walking out of the living room back to bed.
Scene 5 House Night
Camera cut to an extreme close up of alarm clock. Camera cut to medium shot of younger brother coming out of his room the younger brother shuts the door behind him. Camera cut to long shot of younger brother downstairs in the living room he shuts the door behind him.. Camera tracks young brother as he walk towards the stereo in the living room, he crouches down and opens the glass door of the stereo. Camera cut to extreme close up of younger brother turning the volume knob all the way to the maximum. Music begins. Camera cut to long shot of younger brother leaving the living room he shuts the door behind him. Camera cuts to medium shot of older brother upstairs in his bedroom he is disturbed by the loud music, he is tossing and turning and puts his pillow over his head. Camera cuts to long shot of older brother opening the door into the living room walking towards the stereo with his hands over his head his facial expression is annoyed as he cannot stand the loud music. As older brother reaches stereo he crouches down with one hand over his head the camera tracks him. Camera cuts to extreme close up of younger brother turning down the knob for the volume. Music fades out. Camera cut to long shot of older brother and track him walking out of the living room the older brother shut the door behind him.
Scene 6 Interior- Day- School-classroom
Camera cuts to Establishing shot of Eastbrook School. Camera cut to close up pf whiteboard. On the whiteboard it has exam details Camera cut long shot of pupil writing on paper. Camera cut to close up of pupil writing on paper. Camera cut to long shot from classroom and tracks younger brother walking along school corridor the younger brother knock on the door. Camera cuts to medium shot and track teacher walking towards the door. As teacher approaches door Camera cuts to long shot of teacher opening the door, the teacher leaves the classroom and shuts the door behind her. Camera cuts to medium shotof younger brother and teacher talking.
Younger brother: here’s my coursework miss (hands over folder to teacher)
Teacher: Thank you (takes folder) Where’s your older brother? He’s got an exam (slightly concerned)
Younger brother: Miss I don’t know where he is (slightly raises his hands up)
Teacher: he’s supposed to be in here he’s got an exam (concerned)
Younger brother: (shrugs shoulders) I think he forgot about it or something

Teacher: I’ll call him (takes out phone)
Younger : (takes step back) miss I have to leave (walks off)
Teacher looks back then dials number and brings phone to ear.. Camera zooms in on younger brother as he walks off. Camera cut to extreme close up of teacher calling older brother. begins Camera cut to an extreme close up and begins to zoom out, of the older brother’s phone in his hands as he is still in bed. Music begins. Camera cut to high angle medium shot of older brother in bed with the phone still ringing in his hand. Camera cut to close up of teacher ringing older brother. Camera cut back high angle long shot of older brother in bed with the ringing phone in his hands. Film ends, shot cut to black. Credits roll.
Interior – House -day
Music begins to play, film starts with transition of one second fade from black to an establishing shot of a street. Camera CUTs to low angle shot of the sky camera begins to slowly tilt downwards onto the house. In between the tilt, camera cuts to a long shot of a busy road, cars and buses drive by. Camera continues tilt downwards unto the house. Camera CUTS to medium shot of younger brother combing his afro.
Younger Brother: This guy man, he is over there!
Camera CUTS back of the younger brother head watching TV.
Camera CUT to an extreme long shot of older brother walking towards the house
the older brother is wearing a dark green adiddas jacket with his hood up. Camera CUTS to a close up of the back of the younger brother’s head watching TV. Camera CUTS to a long shot of the older brother walking on the driveway towards door getting his keys out of his pocket. Music volume increases. When the older brother reaches the door the Camera cut to an extreme close up older brother using his keys to open door camera begins to zoom out as the older brother begins to take his first steps into the house..
Scene 1living room and dining room
Camera CUTs to medium shot of older brother shutting the door behind him and taking his hood down. As the Older brother walks away from the front door, the Camera Cuts to an extreme long shot of the back of the older brother walking through the corridor and into the dining room. Music fades out.
Older brother: Yo e-man you in?
Younger Brother: yeah I am in here
As the older brother reaches the end of the dining room, the Camera CUTS to low angle shot of the older brother standing and leaning on the wall with the younger brother sitting on the couch. Camera cut to an over shoulder shot of the older brother talking to the younger brother.
Older Brother: Has mum and dad gone yet?
As younger brother moves his head The camera cuts to low angle shot of the younger brother
Younger brother: ere blad! (stern)
Camera cut to over the shoulder shot of older brother
Younger brother: they left in the morning! (stern, raises voice, facial expression cross)
Camera cut to low angle shot of the back of younger brother sitting on the couch the older brother begins to move towards the younger brother with his hand in his pockets
Older brother: oi bruv don’t give me that attitude (facial expression annoyed irritated)
Camera cut back to over the shoulder shot of older brother moving toward younger brother
Younger brother: Shuttup man! (raises voice, annoyed)
Camera cut to low angle shot of the back younger brother.
Older brother: who do you think you’re talking to? (angry)
Older brother raises his hand towards the younger brother. Younger brother flinches and leans back.
Younger brother: what’s your problem? (furious)
Older brother walks off
Camera cuts back to over the shoulder shot of older brother walking off, the younger brother facial expression is furious.
Camera cuts to Medium shot of older brother leaving the room walking into the dining room as older brother pulls the chair to sit down the camera tilts downward. High angle shot of older brother taking his books out of his bag. As the older brother is taking his books out his bag camera cuts to medium shot of younger brother taking his phone out of his pocket and starts to text. Camera cut to high angle shot of older brother taking out his folder. The camera cut to an extreme close up of the younger brother phone, a text is sent. Then the camera cuts to a POV shot of the older brother highlighting his exam timetable .camera cut back to a long shot of older brother taking off his jacket leaving it on the chair walking off into the corridor. Camera cuts to a long shot of the older brother walking through the corridor towards the camera he puts his hands on the banister as he is going upstairs. Camera cut to long profile shot of older brother walking upstairs.
Interior- house -night
Scene 2
Another High angle of the sky camera begins to tilt downwards as camera tilts downwards the shot slowly dissolves from day into the night . Camera CUT to long shot of younger brother standing up from couch stretching his arms out and yawning. Camera cuts to close up of younger brother scratching his head and walking towards dining room. Camera cuts to long shot of younger brother and tracks him walking towards the dining room. As younger brother walks pass the dining table he notices the older brother exam timetable as younger brother reaches out and grabs the older brother’s exam timetable the camera tilts downwards then the camera tilts upwards as the younger brother bring the exam timetable to his face to read. Meanwhile upstairs the older brother is tidying it up. Camera cuts to an extreme close up of a pillow being pulled across. Camera cut and tilts upwards as the older brother is fluffing up his pillow. Camera tilts downwards as older brother puts the pillow on the mattress. Downstairs the older brother is feeling smug that he found the older brother’s timetable. Camera cut to a medium shot of younger brother looking at the older brother’s timetable
Younger brother: alright then (cocky)
the camera CUTS to a medium shot of the older brother upstairs in his room pulling his curtains together. Downstairs in the living room the younger brother receives a phone call. Camera cuts to a High angle shot of younger brother sitting on the couch his mobile rings. Upstairs the camera cuts to a close up of the older brother wrapping up his mp4 and putting it on his desk. . Camera CUTS back to long shot of younger brother downstairs, the younger brother stands up from the couch speaking on the phone.
Camera tilts upwards.
Younger brother: yeah, hello
Upstairs, Camera cuts back to an extreme close up of older brothers hand arranging his shoes. Downstairs, camera cuts back to close up of younger brother downstairs in the kitchen speaking on his phone.
Younger brother: He is always bullying me! the way he was talking to me this morning! (Irritated, raises voice)
Camera cuts back to frame shot of older brother arranging his shoes. Over the duration of the shot there is voiceover of the younger brother speaking on hisphone.
Younger brother: look he’s got an exam tomorrow and that guy isn’t definitely not gonna make it, yeah that will teach him a lesson (stern)
Camera cuts back to close of younger brother downstairs in the kitchen
Younger brother: yeah just trust me gotta go man bye.
Upstairs the older brother has finished tidying up his room, Camera cuts to medium shot of older brother leaving his room. Camera cut to Long shot of the back of the younger brother downstairs walking out of the kitchen. Camera Cuts to high angle shot of younger brother and older brother at the bottom of the stairs.
Younger brother: Good luck man (smug)
Camera cuts to low angle medium shot of older brother and younger brother. Younger brother is going up the stairs.
Older brother: What you talking about? (Surprised)
Camera cuts to High angle shot of older and younger brother. Younger brother is walking up the stairs.
Younger brother: (chuckles) don’t worry man
Camera cuts to long shot of younger brother and older brother at the stairs.
Younger brother: (chuckles) don’t worry
Older brother: (sighs)
Older brother walks into the kitchen. Camera cut to long shot of the back of the older brother walking to utility room to get something to eat. Camera cut to medium shot of younger brother going upstairs. While downstairs the camera cuts to medium shot of older brother taken bread and butter to the kitchen counter. Camera cuts to medium shot of younger brother upstairs opening the door to his bedroom. Camera cuts back to a medium shot of the older brother just finishing eating his sandwich. Camera cut back to high angle shot of younger brother getting into bed.
Scene 3 House night
Downstairs the camera cut’s to a long shot of older brother leaving the kitchen and going up the stairs to his bedroom as the older brother reaches upstairs he puts his hand on the banister camera cuts to medium shot of older brother walking to his room. camera cuts to medium shot of the back of the older brother he open his door and switches on the light and shuts the door behind him
As the night goes on camera cuts to an extreme close up of an alarm clock camera cuts to medium shot of younger brother peeking out of his room as the younger brother looks left to right the camera pans to a POV shot and pans from the stairs to the bedroom door of the older brother camera cuts to medium shot of younger brother sneaking out of his room he switches the light off in his bedroom and while keeping an eye out for any sign of his older brother coming out of his room and he closes his bedroom door carefully, Camera tracks younger brother as he goes down the stairs. As the younger brother reaches the end of the stairs camera cut to long shot of younger brother and track him walking into the kitchen towards the boiler. the younger brother pulls down the catch on the boiler. the camera cut to an extreme close up of younger brother turning up the knob on the boiler then the Camera cut an extreme close up of the screen on the boiler showing the temperature. When the younger brother has finished turning up the central heating. The Camera cuts to a long shot of pulling the lid of boiler back to its place. Camera tracks younger brother as he walks out of the kitchen towards the stairs. As the younger brother reaches the end of the stairs camera cut to medium shot of younger brother walking towards his bedroom, opening his bedroom door and shutting it behind him. Camera cuts to close of older brother’s face in bed. Due to the rise in temperature the older brother is tossing and turning in his bed throughout this, the shot goes through a series of dissolves. The Last shot dissolves into high angle shot of the older brother sitting on the edge of the bed flicking up his t-shirt up and down.
Scene 4 House Night
Camera cuts to medium shot of younger brother coming out of his room. Camera dissolves to medium shots of the younger brother downstairs messing up the living room by taking out board games books and controller pad and spreading them all over the living room. Camera cut to an extreme close up of older brother feet going downstairs. When the younger brother hear the older brother footsteps camera cuts to medium shot, he rises up the camera tilts upwards.
Younger brother: What’s that? (Surprised)
Camera cut to long shot of younger brother running away (tracked by the camera) from the living room he leans on the dining room wall. He keeps an eye out of the older brother in the background walking across the corridor into the living room. When the younger brother sees that the older brother is out of sight he makes a dash to the stairs. Camera cuts to medium shot and tracks younger brother running to his bedroom, younger brother looks backs at the stairs,
Younger brother: (sighs)
Younger brother goes back into his room. Camera cuts back to long shot of older brother tidying up the living room. As the older brother downstairs tidies up the living room the transitions of shot dissolves as the older brother puts back boar, games, controller pads and books back. Camera dissolves into long shot of older brother walking out of the living room back to bed.
Scene 5 House Night
Camera cut to an extreme close up of alarm clock. Camera cut to medium shot of younger brother coming out of his room the younger brother shuts the door behind him. Camera cut to long shot of younger brother downstairs in the living room he shuts the door behind him.. Camera tracks young brother as he walk towards the stereo in the living room, he crouches down and opens the glass door of the stereo. Camera cut to extreme close up of younger brother turning the volume knob all the way to the maximum. Music begins. Camera cut to long shot of younger brother leaving the living room he shuts the door behind him. Camera cuts to medium shot of older brother upstairs in his bedroom he is disturbed by the loud music, he is tossing and turning and puts his pillow over his head. Camera cuts to long shot of older brother opening the door into the living room walking towards the stereo with his hands over his head his facial expression is annoyed as he cannot stand the loud music. As older brother reaches stereo he crouches down with one hand over his head the camera tracks him. Camera cuts to extreme close up of younger brother turning down the knob for the volume. Music fades out. Camera cut to long shot of older brother and track him walking out of the living room the older brother shut the door behind him.
Scene 6 Interior- Day- School-classroom
Camera cuts to Establishing shot of Eastbrook School. Camera cut to close up pf whiteboard. On the whiteboard it has exam details Camera cut long shot of pupil writing on paper. Camera cut to close up of pupil writing on paper. Camera cut to long shot from classroom and tracks younger brother walking along school corridor the younger brother knock on the door. Camera cuts to medium shot and track teacher walking towards the door. As teacher approaches door Camera cuts to long shot of teacher opening the door, the teacher leaves the classroom and shuts the door behind her. Camera cuts to medium shotof younger brother and teacher talking.
Younger brother: here’s my coursework miss (hands over folder to teacher)
Teacher: Thank you (takes folder) Where’s your older brother? He’s got an exam (slightly concerned)
Younger brother: Miss I don’t know where he is (slightly raises his hands up)
Teacher: he’s supposed to be in here he’s got an exam (concerned)
Younger brother: (shrugs shoulders) I think he forgot about it or something

Teacher: I’ll call him (takes out phone)
Younger : (takes step back) miss I have to leave (walks off)
Teacher looks back then dials number and brings phone to ear.. Camera zooms in on younger brother as he walks off. Camera cut to extreme close up of teacher calling older brother. begins Camera cut to an extreme close up and begins to zoom out, of the older brother’s phone in his hands as he is still in bed. Music begins. Camera cut to high angle medium shot of older brother in bed with the phone still ringing in his hand. Camera cut to close up of teacher ringing older brother. Camera cut back high angle long shot of older brother in bed with the ringing phone in his hands. Film ends, shot cut to black. Credits roll.
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